7/19

what's going on?

looks kinda like
some sorta
blend of
haiku-ish minimalism
(Gary Snyder--merci)
interspersed with
rhymes of opportunity
(Kay Ryan--grazi)
-a propensity
to eschew
the first person singular
if possible (not to disparage
introspectionalism should
such a movement exist)
-a tendency to list
that lacks elegance
of syntax
& an awkward voice that's
not so much a matter of choice
though--it's
just the way the dendrites
flow